Wednesday, June 12, 2013

The Original Plot Line for "The Reunion"

Like many authors, I write a treatment before I start writing the actual novel. A treatment is a brief summary, a blueprint if you will, of who the characters are and what the story will be about. It helps solidify ideas and creates a starting point. Once I start writing, however, I put the treatment aside and let my characters loose. When the novel is complete, I'll go back and look at the original treatment. To say the final story turned out differently would be an understatement. So, just for laughs, I'm posting what was in the original treatment for The Reunion.

Warning, spoiler alert!

Many of the main points from the original treatment were included the final novel, such as leading man Ian showing up unexpectedly at leading lady Gillian's opening at a Denver art gallery, and her subsequent return to Denver to hide out from her homicidal ex husband. However, a subplot about Ian selling his house and moving into a condo with his son, Larry, never made it into the final version. Good thing too. It was boring and did nothing to enhance the story. Likewise, many other scenes in the final novel were never included in the treatment, such as a pivotal moment when Gillian nearly drowns.

The most notable change, however, had to do with the characters themselves. Laura, Ian's ex wife, was intended to be shy and demure. A savvy businesswoman, she ended up being anything but shy and demure. Laura speaks her mind. That's why Jeremy is so direct.

And speaking of Ian's oldest son, Jeremy was originally intended to be a villain. Aggressive, if not nefarious, Jeremy was to only have a small role before being written out. In the treatment, Gillian befriends him and he tries to force himself on her. She, of course, turns him down. Rejected, he soon enlists in the Marines and ends up being deployed to Afghanistan while a furious Ian blames it all on Gillian. Nah, that definitely wouldn't have worked. Ian wouldn't have had such an evil son. Then Jeremy told me he wasn't a bad guy either, although he is still drawn to Gillian. He would, instead, became a rival, rescuing Gillian when she nearly drowns, then competing with his father for her affection. This created a whole new subplot which became the second half of the book. Many readers tell me it was their favorite part of the story.

The end of the story was fairly close to what was in the original treatment. Now I can't tell you that because it would spoil it for the those who haven't yet read the novel. Suffice to say that it all works out, and Gillian ends up with the right guy.

MM